Made of more

L.g state + and - about the film

S.o.s 2 + and 2 -

A cloud with a human personality, that's definitely personification. Have you ever met a cloud that could save firemen waiting 20 minutes to put out a fire?the more he did the more he became.it started when 1 cloud traveled the seas not only not using the wind but saving people's lives . a cloud with mind of a human being. He played around in the traffic lights which made him super colourful. He made his way around the city and searched for the goods. He saw a fire so he put it out with his thunder and lightning. He saved a life. i really like this film because it's encouraging and really important contents. I didn't like how they were talking in the background and didn't let the film express itself. I also really liked how 1 cloud turned into its own hero. I didn't exactly like how the made the cloud look animated. The thing that they should of added is common sence. People 7-11 she watch this. I rate it a 3.5 because they didnt explain how he turned nice

By lani

The lego story

S.o.s 1. Hook in2. Summary 3. Liked or disliked 4. Age appropriate 5. rating

I really liked this short film. It is really fun because they talk about the 1942. It creates a very encouraging and captivating take back.you would really like this. It all started when a guy was super duper poor and had to close down his work shop because he didn't have enough money to pay all the bills. But then he started making wooden toys like drag on wheels and other fun things. Then his work shop burnt down and he was very depressed and upset he made a much bigger and better one . he wanted to join someone's shop. So then he joined someone's shop but he didn't get as much money as he wanted but he was fine with it. Then he made a huge factory but it never burnt down or went bad. Then he created lego land and lego world and eventually everybody found out about it. I really like this but it doesn't tell you the whole story. You should probably be around 8-11 years old. I rate it a 5/10.

1.Are you going to take a bath.            

Eww no that's just soaking

In your own filth. today ill

Be taking you guys through

A whole day on me, and

2.My germs.eww. I have recently

been through 1, 2, 3, 4, 3285

days and living so I know what

I'm talking about here so turn

Them ears on but like dont

3.Touch them at all. I've met face

To face in a mirror the biggest

Germ freak ever, lani rova

Alright let's go

4. firstly in the morning I get

Up and get dressed. But then

I realize what's been all over

The floor. So I get my pillows,

my blankets, my everything really

5.To make a parkour. So after that

I would usually have coco pops.

I kinda, umm sorta don't eat with

A spoon. Why? Because other

people put their mouth on it

6.So i would get the extra sparkling

spoon. the one that i washed. Like

Just imagine, mum, dad, granny

Uncles, aunts,mums friends dads

friends , friends everyone really

7.everyone that comes to your

house really puts their germs on

The spoon like eehh. After i would

brush my teeth. But everyone

Swipes the brush all over it like

8. Mum, dad, and my siblings.so

I would squirt a bunch out so its

Like there's no germs. Then i go

To the car.but then i wonders whos

Scrubbed there but all over here.

9.secondly, at school, ugh what do

I do you may ask, freak out about

Germs. So i walk into class and then

Grab a basket ball and then go do hoops

10. Then I feel some germs. So I

Race to the bathroom to wash my

Hands. Then we have to do work and

Obviously we need a pen. I usually

Loose my pen so I would ask someone

11. To borrow theres. So I would start

Writing but then I have a peek at the

tip of the pen and see bite marks on

It. then I shake ugh thats gross. I would

Give it back of course. Then we do maths

12.i've always wondered if I use

sanitiser 4 times a day and it

only kills 99.9 germs How many

germs will it kill. Oh here's a calculator

Lets see. Omg omg omg who's touched

13.this. Ugh sanitiser please. Thirdly

Night time the worst thing yet. I have

To do swimming. So I dive in. eww

What's that on the bottom. Its looks

Like a snot rocket eeww. But I keep

14. On swimming. So after swimming

I would go get changed and go

to the shower.i walk across the ground.

I hope no one's peed here. After I

finish swimming I go home and eat

13. Tea again I don't eat with spoon

Since its tea we can all eat with our

Hands right. I would go to bed around

8.30 omg i have to get back into the bed

I slept in ewww. I hope I have told you

14. Enough about my germs oh god

I made a mistake. People have touched

This card jeez. Germ girl outta here!

Dear Mr peters

I am writing to you to recommend that you choose a coalition with national.

More money

1. National is going to give more money to the people who don't live in a beautiful house or any type of house like you do.  There Are A lot Of People out there  considering  that  they don't have a Privilege To do much but also they don't have lots of food. They're also going to be giving the workers extra money. Wouldn't that want them to do more work. More money, more privileges

Lower house prices

National is bringing down the prices for houses which is very good.The people who are struggling to Live Don't have a house, don't have a toilet, don't have a beautiful clean room.They are people who sleep with critters every single night. Oh!!

It would be a big thing to the homeless of money less to have a clean shelter. everyone needs a home.

Clean rivers

Labour is having clean rivers for kids to be safe in. like really, i don't think a kid wants to swim in a river. workers wouldn't Want to Clean things that are included dirty. It's not like you can call “Genie’’

And it will come. It will take a long time to work on it!

So I hope you have change your mind National

Sps cooks up a storm

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On monday the 11th of september stratford primary school year ⅚ students had a cook up.they produced a unforgettable moment. They were challenged to create a 3 dishes for their customers and a restaurant looking hall. For their meals they cooked up a storm. For there entree they had a delicious looking onion soup with a crunchy french stick to go with it, for there main they had a tangy looking tartiflette and it looked like a shepherd's pie. For their dessert it was for sure fluffy. They had chocolate mousse covered with whipped cream and of course sprinkles. It look awesome!!

There probably was a pack of flavour. The had a very cute big eiffel tower and it stood out a bunch. They had a colored chain that covered the whole table in the colours blue and red. They had a bunch of flamingo lights That covered nicely on the big Eiffel Tower.They had a placement on everyone's seat representing their country. In the kitchen kids were on fire. Which were focused because they have to be good. Kids were running around looking for their ingredients to cook with and they work differently having a blast. All the French flamingoes Waiters were handing out there yums there yums. They were dressed nice full nicely. They for sure loved in

By Lani

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The yr 3 to 6 toilets

Emagine this, a famous visitor came to the school and had to inspect the whole entire school and went into the girls toilets and screams. That will be bad. Now listen up.

Firstly, kids have to go through every toilet desperate for toilet paper because there is none. We have to use the toilet paper to wipe our bottoms. Kids could feel uncomfortable going into those bathrooms because they're not doing their personal business. We need all the toilet paper we need

Secondly, we're all trapped with the 65 year 3 and 4s hogging up all the 3 toilets we have. Don't expect us to do our business with no toilet. The year 3 and 4 Junior people block all the sinks and we get every single blame. We are getting bad habits walking through the toilets with sloppy ground.

Thirdly, How would you like to walk through a whole bunch of pee or even water that kids have touch with their poopy hands. The germs then go outside and then everybody gets this all over their feet. sorry, how do you wash your feet? THERE IS GROSS STUFF EEWWW

“But you guys need to keep the bathroom clean” I believe you said. But actually you need to clean the toilet because we have a little bit of it then since they're not when we get it more dirty

Mr elder i hope you have changed your mind to have the girls toilets SPARKLING

By Lani

Panic attack!!!!!

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It was saturday night and me, my mum and my little brother were watching a movie. It was very horrible weather outside. I felt like the weather was gonna rip down my house like a tornado.“i wonder if there's gonna be thunder.” mum wondered. I felt super scared.

The rain got harder and the movie got scarier. I felt a nerve through my brain. It seriously felt like a strange weird one. I got super scared and i mean suuuupppee rrrrrrrrr scared. It felt like stiff spaghetti. I held my blanket super tight like i was pinching my brother. It was getting to the point where the rain was getting over worse. It was thumping on my roof like a giraffe throwing a tanty. Then my mum heard thunder and told us to go get a extra blanket so your toasty

Then there was a big strike. I started to to panic and got very scared. I started crying because i didn't know what to do . i had a drink but spat it all up. I was shaking very hard “ i need you to call the ambulance” i panicked.

I was calling out “help, i'm gonna die” i felt like i couldn't breath.

After a bit the thunder stopped and i was still feeling dead. I was still panicking but not to much. I had to watch a kiddie program so i wasn't panicking. I felt very ashamed because i had to change the channel to what they probably hated. I went fast asleep and started having a great dream.