Sps cooks up a storm

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On monday the 11th of september stratford primary school year ⅚ students had a cook up.they produced a unforgettable moment. They were challenged to create a 3 dishes for their customers and a restaurant looking hall. For their meals they cooked up a storm. For there entree they had a delicious looking onion soup with a crunchy french stick to go with it, for there main they had a tangy looking tartiflette and it looked like a shepherd's pie. For their dessert it was for sure fluffy. They had chocolate mousse covered with whipped cream and of course sprinkles. It look awesome!!

There probably was a pack of flavour. The had a very cute big eiffel tower and it stood out a bunch. They had a colored chain that covered the whole table in the colours blue and red. They had a bunch of flamingo lights That covered nicely on the big Eiffel Tower.They had a placement on everyone's seat representing their country. In the kitchen kids were on fire. Which were focused because they have to be good. Kids were running around looking for their ingredients to cook with and they work differently having a blast. All the French flamingoes Waiters were handing out there yums there yums. They were dressed nice full nicely. They for sure loved in

By Lani

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The yr 3 to 6 toilets

Emagine this, a famous visitor came to the school and had to inspect the whole entire school and went into the girls toilets and screams. That will be bad. Now listen up.

Firstly, kids have to go through every toilet desperate for toilet paper because there is none. We have to use the toilet paper to wipe our bottoms. Kids could feel uncomfortable going into those bathrooms because they're not doing their personal business. We need all the toilet paper we need

Secondly, we're all trapped with the 65 year 3 and 4s hogging up all the 3 toilets we have. Don't expect us to do our business with no toilet. The year 3 and 4 Junior people block all the sinks and we get every single blame. We are getting bad habits walking through the toilets with sloppy ground.

Thirdly, How would you like to walk through a whole bunch of pee or even water that kids have touch with their poopy hands. The germs then go outside and then everybody gets this all over their feet. sorry, how do you wash your feet? THERE IS GROSS STUFF EEWWW

“But you guys need to keep the bathroom clean” I believe you said. But actually you need to clean the toilet because we have a little bit of it then since they're not when we get it more dirty

Mr elder i hope you have changed your mind to have the girls toilets SPARKLING

By Lani