Dear Mr peters

I am writing to you to recommend that you choose a coalition with national.

More money

1. National is going to give more money to the people who don't live in a beautiful house or any type of house like you do.  There Are A lot Of People out there  considering  that  they don't have a Privilege To do much but also they don't have lots of food. They're also going to be giving the workers extra money. Wouldn't that want them to do more work. More money, more privileges

Lower house prices

National is bringing down the prices for houses which is very good.The people who are struggling to Live Don't have a house, don't have a toilet, don't have a beautiful clean room.They are people who sleep with critters every single night. Oh!!

It would be a big thing to the homeless of money less to have a clean shelter. everyone needs a home.

Clean rivers

Labour is having clean rivers for kids to be safe in. like really, i don't think a kid wants to swim in a river. workers wouldn't Want to Clean things that are included dirty. It's not like you can call “Genie’’

And it will come. It will take a long time to work on it!

So I hope you have change your mind National

Sps cooks up a storm

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On monday the 11th of september stratford primary school year ⅚ students had a cook up.they produced a unforgettable moment. They were challenged to create a 3 dishes for their customers and a restaurant looking hall. For their meals they cooked up a storm. For there entree they had a delicious looking onion soup with a crunchy french stick to go with it, for there main they had a tangy looking tartiflette and it looked like a shepherd's pie. For their dessert it was for sure fluffy. They had chocolate mousse covered with whipped cream and of course sprinkles. It look awesome!!

There probably was a pack of flavour. The had a very cute big eiffel tower and it stood out a bunch. They had a colored chain that covered the whole table in the colours blue and red. They had a bunch of flamingo lights That covered nicely on the big Eiffel Tower.They had a placement on everyone's seat representing their country. In the kitchen kids were on fire. Which were focused because they have to be good. Kids were running around looking for their ingredients to cook with and they work differently having a blast. All the French flamingoes Waiters were handing out there yums there yums. They were dressed nice full nicely. They for sure loved in

By Lani

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The yr 3 to 6 toilets

Emagine this, a famous visitor came to the school and had to inspect the whole entire school and went into the girls toilets and screams. That will be bad. Now listen up.

Firstly, kids have to go through every toilet desperate for toilet paper because there is none. We have to use the toilet paper to wipe our bottoms. Kids could feel uncomfortable going into those bathrooms because they're not doing their personal business. We need all the toilet paper we need

Secondly, we're all trapped with the 65 year 3 and 4s hogging up all the 3 toilets we have. Don't expect us to do our business with no toilet. The year 3 and 4 Junior people block all the sinks and we get every single blame. We are getting bad habits walking through the toilets with sloppy ground.

Thirdly, How would you like to walk through a whole bunch of pee or even water that kids have touch with their poopy hands. The germs then go outside and then everybody gets this all over their feet. sorry, how do you wash your feet? THERE IS GROSS STUFF EEWWW

“But you guys need to keep the bathroom clean” I believe you said. But actually you need to clean the toilet because we have a little bit of it then since they're not when we get it more dirty

Mr elder i hope you have changed your mind to have the girls toilets SPARKLING

By Lani

Panic attack!!!!!

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It was saturday night and me, my mum and my little brother were watching a movie. It was very horrible weather outside. I felt like the weather was gonna rip down my house like a tornado.“i wonder if there's gonna be thunder.” mum wondered. I felt super scared.

The rain got harder and the movie got scarier. I felt a nerve through my brain. It seriously felt like a strange weird one. I got super scared and i mean suuuupppee rrrrrrrrr scared. It felt like stiff spaghetti. I held my blanket super tight like i was pinching my brother. It was getting to the point where the rain was getting over worse. It was thumping on my roof like a giraffe throwing a tanty. Then my mum heard thunder and told us to go get a extra blanket so your toasty

Then there was a big strike. I started to to panic and got very scared. I started crying because i didn't know what to do . i had a drink but spat it all up. I was shaking very hard “ i need you to call the ambulance” i panicked.

I was calling out “help, i'm gonna die” i felt like i couldn't breath.

After a bit the thunder stopped and i was still feeling dead. I was still panicking but not to much. I had to watch a kiddie program so i wasn't panicking. I felt very ashamed because i had to change the channel to what they probably hated. I went fast asleep and started having a great dream.

||Jacob the very bad ghost||

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Once upon a time there was a girl called allie  

Who was a fun and awesome girl. She lived In a village which was next to a haunted Forest.

Allie walks into the haunted forest and heard noises like  goOka swooshing bush or something crackling. She Walked over to see the incident. She heard and saw Jacob.

Ellie sees a ghost standing next to Jacob and she screams . Jacob answered “ghosts are not real and never will be so don't say it” Jacob had disagreed, so he got a snap branch and started beating it as hard as he could .

The ghost was watching him beat her up, so the ghost went and got a branch that was snapped earlier. But only the ghost picked it up and started beating up Jacob and Allie made it home back very safely without getting hurt

The end

                                                   Jazz

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there was a girl named jazz who threw a Spazz. She threw things around but weighed a few pounds. she went for a a stroll down to the woods and then she got awesomely good!!

by Lani 

Safety first!!!!!

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1. Title
2. Intro
3. materials
4. Steps
5. conclusion

Title: safety first

Intro: How would you like to fall out of a plane and get bitten by a shark with no gear, well keep reading if you wanna survive death

Materials:

• Helmet
• Safety glasses
• Phone
• Keys
• Plane
• Appropriate clothes

1. Secure your helmet so it's tight

Not too tight or you will act like a chicken having a heart attack

2. Wipe your safety goggles and chuck them on so you look like Harry Potter

3. Now you are going to position your suit on, and just remember you're not putting on your wedding dress to go out for dinner your positioning safety

4. So now go smash repairs of the heart PS don't think of your car. you are flying a plane????

5.Say goodbye to parents. Include a fire to Mum and Dad love you to the clouds and back. Get it clouds, planes hahaha

6.Walk out to your plane and remember to do a little dance to get your body up with petrol

7.slip your key into and to the whole like your punching your brother in the stomach

If you follow these steps you will have a lifetime experience

By Lani