||Jacob the very bad ghost||

L.G elaborate using good ideas

S.O.S add another sentence explaining the same thing

Once upon a time there was a girl called allie  

Who was a fun and awesome girl. She lived In a village which was next to a haunted Forest.

Allie walks into the haunted forest and heard noises like  goOka swooshing bush or something crackling. She Walked over to see the incident. She heard and saw Jacob.

Ellie sees a ghost standing next to Jacob and she screams . Jacob answered “ghosts are not real and never will be so don't say it” Jacob had disagreed, so he got a snap branch and started beating it as hard as he could .

The ghost was watching him beat her up, so the ghost went and got a branch that was snapped earlier. But only the ghost picked it up and started beating up Jacob and Allie made it home back very safely without getting hurt

The end

                                                   Jazz

L.G elaborate using good ideas

S.O.S use and\or

there was a girl named jazz who threw a Spazz. She threw things around but weighed a few pounds. she went for a a stroll down to the woods and then she got awesomely good!!

by Lani 

Safety first!!!!!

L.G use precise words

S.O.S haven't used get, grab

Include humour or put

1. Title
2. Intro
3. materials
4. Steps
5. conclusion

Title: safety first

Intro: How would you like to fall out of a plane and get bitten by a shark with no gear, well keep reading if you wanna survive death

Materials:

• Helmet
• Safety glasses
• Phone
• Keys
• Plane
• Appropriate clothes

1. Secure your helmet so it's tight

Not too tight or you will act like a chicken having a heart attack

2. Wipe your safety goggles and chuck them on so you look like Harry Potter

3. Now you are going to position your suit on, and just remember you're not putting on your wedding dress to go out for dinner your positioning safety

4. So now go smash repairs of the heart PS don't think of your car. you are flying a plane????

5.Say goodbye to parents. Include a fire to Mum and Dad love you to the clouds and back. Get it clouds, planes hahaha

6.Walk out to your plane and remember to do a little dance to get your body up with petrol

7.slip your key into and to the whole like your punching your brother in the stomach

If you follow these steps you will have a lifetime experience

By Lani

L.G create a mood of fear/ horror

S.O.S language that creates fear

Dear mum and dad

Just a second ago, I shot a german soldier through the heart. He dropped into the trench with blood pouring everywhere. I saw the air force about to drop a huge bomb on us. I was screaming, “RUN!” I am running as fast as i can, i'm getting the shivers. Last night i fell in the trench and did something to my back, luckily I landed on a dead african so it wasn't that bad. I've already heard 93 gunshots through the afternoon. Just before my best friend rickerson got shot through the leg just next to the safety, I helped him get back to abrihan to fix him. I told him he will still last and he will be back after he gets fixed. Dead bodies caught my eyes. running a shooting, hoping i don't shoot any nz soldiers. I jump into a trench and start running. I feel claustrophobic. I closed my eyes and ran into the side of the trench. I got a huge hunk of dirt in my eye. I really hope I come back to your beautiful faces. I saw mania get shot through the head. I wishing to come back to you guys. I wish I could have behaved for you, catched the tears and have a wonderful roast beef with you! I love you guys as much as possible. I wilI will send another letter back and if not goodbye. I love you so much!!!

Love you always,

Kody