Wednesday, May 3, 2017

L.G create a mood of fear/ horror
S.O.S language that creates fear

Dear mum and dad

Just a second ago, I shot a german soldier through the heart. He dropped into the trench with blood pouring everywhere. I saw the air force about to drop a huge bomb on us. I was screaming, “RUN!” I am running as fast as i can, i'm getting the shivers. Last night i fell in the trench and did something to my back, luckily I landed on a dead african so it wasn't that bad. I've already heard 93 gunshots through the afternoon. Just before my best friend rickerson got shot through the leg just next to the safety, I helped him get back to abrihan to fix him. I told him he will still last and he will be back after he gets fixed. Dead bodies caught my eyes. running a shooting, hoping i don't shoot any nz soldiers. I jump into a trench and start running. I feel claustrophobic. I closed my eyes and ran into the side of the trench. I got a huge hunk of dirt in my eye. I really hope I come back to your beautiful faces. I saw mania get shot through the head. I wishing to come back to you guys. I wish I could have behaved for you, catched the tears and have a wonderful roast beef with you! I love you guys as much as possible. I wilI will send another letter back and if not goodbye. I love you so much!!!

Love you always,

Kody

2 comments:

  1. good: ending
    Good: met L.G
    Next:full stops

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  2. L.G.achived
    S.O.S achived
    Use different words instede of I

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