Panic attack!!!!!

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It was saturday night and me, my mum and my little brother were watching a movie. It was very horrible weather outside. I felt like the weather was gonna rip down my house like a tornado.“i wonder if there's gonna be thunder.” mum wondered. I felt super scared.

The rain got harder and the movie got scarier. I felt a nerve through my brain. It seriously felt like a strange weird one. I got super scared and i mean suuuupppee rrrrrrrrr scared. It felt like stiff spaghetti. I held my blanket super tight like i was pinching my brother. It was getting to the point where the rain was getting over worse. It was thumping on my roof like a giraffe throwing a tanty. Then my mum heard thunder and told us to go get a extra blanket so your toasty

Then there was a big strike. I started to to panic and got very scared. I started crying because i didn't know what to do . i had a drink but spat it all up. I was shaking very hard “ i need you to call the ambulance” i panicked.

I was calling out “help, i'm gonna die” i felt like i couldn't breath.

After a bit the thunder stopped and i was still feeling dead. I was still panicking but not to much. I had to watch a kiddie program so i wasn't panicking. I felt very ashamed because i had to change the channel to what they probably hated. I went fast asleep and started having a great dream.

||Jacob the very bad ghost||

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Once upon a time there was a girl called allie  

Who was a fun and awesome girl. She lived In a village which was next to a haunted Forest.

Allie walks into the haunted forest and heard noises like  goOka swooshing bush or something crackling. She Walked over to see the incident. She heard and saw Jacob.

Ellie sees a ghost standing next to Jacob and she screams . Jacob answered “ghosts are not real and never will be so don't say it” Jacob had disagreed, so he got a snap branch and started beating it as hard as he could .

The ghost was watching him beat her up, so the ghost went and got a branch that was snapped earlier. But only the ghost picked it up and started beating up Jacob and Allie made it home back very safely without getting hurt

The end

                                                   Jazz

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there was a girl named jazz who threw a Spazz. She threw things around but weighed a few pounds. she went for a a stroll down to the woods and then she got awesomely good!!

by Lani