||Jacob the very bad ghost||

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Once upon a time there was a girl called allie  

Who was a fun and awesome girl. She lived In a village which was next to a haunted Forest.

Allie walks into the haunted forest and heard noises like  goOka swooshing bush or something crackling. She Walked over to see the incident. She heard and saw Jacob.

Ellie sees a ghost standing next to Jacob and she screams . Jacob answered “ghosts are not real and never will be so don't say it” Jacob had disagreed, so he got a snap branch and started beating it as hard as he could .

The ghost was watching him beat her up, so the ghost went and got a branch that was snapped earlier. But only the ghost picked it up and started beating up Jacob and Allie made it home back very safely without getting hurt

The end